Thursday, October 3, 2013

Story #3: ZZZZOMMMMMBIIIIIES

ZZZZOMMMMMBIIIIIES
Stomp! Stomp! Stomp! There she was running for dear life, huffing and puffing as she was out of breath. Then all of a sudden out of no where this crazy man jumped out of the ally and tried to eat her. All you could hear was,"ahhhh get o...‚" and it went silent.
30 minutes earlier...
      "Hey John where is my brush I need to get ready for work," she said as she hurried to find her brush. But there was no answer from john. She called for him again, "John," saying a little louder than before, but still no reply from him. She slowly walked out of the room and called for him again and still no reply. Where could he be, she thought. She walked out into the bedroom from the bathroom and he wasn't there, she continued to the hallway were it was dark and she couldn't see much. She eventually reached the end of the hall were she would enter the kitchen were it was still dark and very hard to see. She slowly walked into the kitchen softly saying, "John." She stepped onto the kitchen tile and she felt something wet on her foot. She looked down there was a blood path leading from were she stood to the dining room on the hard wood floor. She slowly walked into the dining room were she seen John on the floor laying there still as a brick wall while a wild man was ripping out his insides. She covered her mouth trying not to startle the sickened man and she slowly moved back but she wasn't quiet enough, he heard her. She turned around and sprinted to the door for her life. The wild man caught here with just his finger tips and she barley made it out the door and shut it in his face. As he scratched at the door trying to get out she looked out and all she seen was houses burning cars wrecked and all she could think of was what kind of hell was I in? She thought about in for a bit and slowly and cautiously walked out off of the porch, she had to go look in the neighbors houses to see if they were okay or if they were crazy like the guy in her house. She walked over to their house and yelled in, "Guys! are you okay?" she called out loudly. Nothing, not a single sound. She walked away from the house scared and as she was walking away the crazy man in her house busted through the door. Now it wasn't only him though it was her husband too. They started running after here and she took of at a dead sprint and she ran towards the center of town were all the stores were at. Stomp! Stomp! Stomp! There she was running for dear life, huffing and puffing as she was out of breath. Then all of a sudden out of no where this crazy man jumped out of the ally and tried to eat her. All you could hear was, "get o...‚"and it went silent. She had been caught by another wild man.
1 week later... "Hey guys come here and look at this," said one of the soldiers as they bend down and looked at the dead women's body, "Look her name tag, it says Erica, she's works at the diner in town."
"Well then it looks like that's our next stop boys. Let's move out," said the captain.

4 comments:

  1. I liked how it tied the beginning with the ending.

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  2. I like how you used the ending in the beginning to tie it together

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  3. I thought it was great I liked the ending I thought it was awesome

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  4. i like how you wrap up the story

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